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5th grade Writing Sample : The Talking Fish

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Write an essay  based on the following prompt -Imagine a fish popped its head out of the water and said something. What would you do? Write a story about what happened. Be sure to include details in your story

Title: The Talking Fish

One sunny morning, I was strolling along the bank of the calm, meandering river that flowed behind my house. I often came here to enjoy the peaceful sounds of nature and watch the gentle ripples on the water’s surface. Little did I know that today, I was in for a surprise that I would never forget.

As I gazed at the clear water, lost in my thoughts, something extraordinary happened. Out of nowhere, a fish suddenly popped its head out of the water! I couldn’t believe my eyes. This was no ordinary fish; it had big, round eyes and shimmering scales that sparkled like diamonds.

The fish cleared its throat, or at least it seemed like it did, and then it spoke, “Good morning! Lovely day for a chat, isn’t it?”

I stumbled backward in shock, almost losing my balance and falling into the river. I blinked several times, thinking that maybe I was dreaming or had too much sun. But there it was, the talking fish, looking at me with a friendly expression.

Still in disbelief, I managed to stammer, “You can talk?”

The fish nodded enthusiastically. “Indeed, I can! And I’ve been waiting for a chance to have a conversation with a human. You see, we fish have our own underwater world, but we’ve always been curious about what happens up here.”

I couldn’t contain my curiosity either. I sat down on a nearby rock, and the fish continued, “My name’s Finn. I live in this river, and I’ve watched you come here day after day. You seem like a friendly person, so I thought I’d say hello.”

I grinned and introduced myself, “I’m Sarah. It’s incredible to meet a talking fish!”

We talked for hours about life in the river, the other fish, and the underwater world. Finn told me about their adventures, the challenges they faced, and their daily routines. It was like entering a whole new world right in my backyard.

As the sun started to set, Finn sighed, “I should get back to my school of fish before it gets too dark. They might start worrying about me.”

I nodded, feeling a bit sad that our conversation had to end. “It was amazing meeting you, Finn. I’ll visit the river more often from now on. Who knows what other surprises are waiting for me?”

Finn smiled, his scales glinting in the fading light. “I’ll be here, Sarah. If you ever want to chat or learn more about our underwater world, just come by. Until next time!”

With a friendly wave, Finn disappeared beneath the water’s surface, leaving me with a newfound appreciation for the wonders of nature. From that day on, I often visited the river, hoping to have more conversations with my new fishy friend.

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