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5th grade Writing Sample : A Surprise Birthday Adventure

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Write an essay  based on the following prompt -Think of a time when someone did something special for you. Perhaps the person sent a card, helped with homework, or cooked a food you like. Write about this time and include details.

Title: A Surprise Birthday Adventure

One of the most special things that ever happened to me was when my parents planned a surprise birthday adventure just for me. It was an unforgettable day filled with love, laughter, and my favorite things.

It all started a week before my birthday. I noticed that my parents were acting a bit secretive, whispering to each other and often checking their phones. I had no idea what they were up to, but I knew it had to be something exciting.

On the morning of my birthday, I woke up to find balloons of all colors scattered across the living room. They danced in the air as if celebrating with me. There was a note attached to one of the balloons that read, “Get ready for an adventure of a lifetime!”

I rushed to get dressed, my heart pounding with excitement. I had no clue where we were going, but I couldn’t wait to find out. As I came downstairs, my parents greeted me with big smiles and a birthday cake covered in my favorite chocolate frosting.

After blowing out the candles and making a wish, my parents handed me an envelope. Inside was a map, and it had a trail marked out with a big “X” at the end. They explained that we were going on a treasure hunt, and the map would lead us to the hidden treasure.

We followed the map’s clues, and each one led us to a different part of our neighborhood. At one point, we found a note under a park bench that said, “Take a moment to enjoy your favorite ice cream.” So, we stopped by the ice cream parlor, and I got a scoop of cookies and cream—the best!

The treasure hunt continued, and it felt like an epic adventure. We climbed hills, crossed a small stream, and even met a friendly dog along the way. Finally, the map led us to a beautiful clearing in the woods.

There, buried under a pile of leaves, we found a treasure chest. My heart raced as I opened it, and inside, I discovered a collection of my favorite books, a new set of colored pencils, and a heartfelt letter from my parents. They told me how much they loved me and how proud they were of the person I was becoming.

Tears of happiness welled up in my eyes as I hugged them tightly. It wasn’t just the treasure that made that day special; it was the love, thoughtfulness, and effort my parents put into creating a birthday adventure I would remember forever.

As the sun began to set, we made our way back home, tired but filled with joy. That birthday taught me that sometimes, the most special gifts aren’t things you can buy but the love and thoughtfulness you put into making someone’s day unforgettable. It was a day filled with love and happiness, and I’ll cherish it forever.

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