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5th grade Writing Sample : The Surprise Package

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Write an essay based on the  following prompt -Imagine you received a package in the mail from a special person. Using details, write about what happened when you opened the package.

Title: The Surprise Package

One sunny afternoon, the doorbell rang, and I raced downstairs to answer it. To my surprise, the mail carrier handed me a package, and the return address revealed it was from my grandma, who lives far away. My heart danced with excitement as I carefully carried the package to the kitchen table. I couldn’t wait to see what was inside!

The package was wrapped in colorful paper with a bow on top. It felt light but was perfectly square. As I sat down, the anticipation bubbled inside me like a shaken soda can. I carefully untied the bow and gently tore the paper away, revealing a plain brown box.

With trembling hands, I lifted the lid. Inside, nestled in tissue paper, was a beautiful, hand-knit scarf. The colors were like a rainbow: vibrant reds, blues, and yellows all woven together in a pattern that resembled a garden in full bloom. It was the most stunning scarf I had ever seen.

A handwritten note lay atop the scarf, and I read it with a smile. “To my dearest grandchild,” it began, “I made this scarf just for you. I hope it keeps you warm on chilly days and reminds you of my love. Even though we’re far apart, you’re always close to my heart. Love, Grandma.”

Tears of happiness welled up in my eyes. It felt like Grandma was right here with me, wrapping me in a warm hug. I gently touched the soft yarn, marveling at the love and care that had gone into creating this masterpiece. Every stitch was a stitch of love.

I put the scarf around my neck, and it felt as cozy as a hug from Grandma herself. It was like a magic scarf that could transport me to her house whenever I wore it.

That day, I felt closer to Grandma than ever before, even though she was miles away. Her surprise package had brought her love right into my home. I couldn’t wait to call her and thank her for the beautiful gift and the warmth it brought to my heart.

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